STOP REWRITING Your Script! Detailed Notes to Improve Your SCREENPLAY! in Tallahassee, Florida For Sale

Over ninety-five percent of all scripts are discarded in Hollywood because a writer's great idea doesn't translate into a great script. The writer has read the Academy Award winning scripts but theirs doesn't quite stand up to the writing in 'Forrest Gump' or 'Shindler's List.' Not only will I help you to realize what is wrong with your script, I will give examples on how to rewrite the dialogue and description. I don't know of any script analysts that do that.
For the last couple years I've been writing, rewriting, and analyzing screenplays for writers, actors, directors, and producers. I've worked on writing or rewriting over 30 screenplays, analyzed over 3,000 screenplays as a script analyst, and sold five screenplays.
SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS RESULTS: In one analysis the writer won $10,000 in the L.A. Comedy Scripts Screenplay Competition. Another analysis helped the writer acquired one million dollars in funding toward making their film. I also helped a comedy writer whose films have grossed 100s of millions of dollars with his hard-boiled thriller.
I charge $250.00 for a detailed script analysis. I take PayPal (pay half up front and the other half after you receive your analysis). On average it takes 1-2 full days to complete an analysis. I also write and rewrite feature-length screenplays for clients.
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I work from your PDF, Word, or Final Draft files.
Contact me today. My analysis will give you the tools to help rewrite your screenplay.
Dan