Don't rewrite your SCREENPLAY until you get my detailed SCRIPT ANALYSIS in Tallahassee, Florida For Sale

You've typed "FADE OUT. THE END" at the bottom of your screenplay. You smile and think you're all done but unfortunately you'd never heard writing is about rewriting. That's where I can help.
Most script reading services give you a general story analysis (known as coverage) that is good for agents, managers and producers who don't read scripts. This is only marginally helpful to the writer who's looking to improve his/her script.
I explore what works and what needs improvement through story, plot, character, dialogue, description, structure, conflict, goals, motivation, tone, inner/external conflict, etc. I even rewrite a bit of description and dialogue here and there to give an example on how it can be improved.
I've sold five screenplays and for the past several years I've been writing and rewriting feature-length screenplays for writers, actors, directors, and producers. I've worked on over 30 screenplays to date and I've read over 3,000 screenplays as a script analyst and for screenwriting contests.
SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS RESULTS: In one analysis the writer won $10,000 in the L.A. Comedy Scripts Screenplay Competition. Another analysis helped the writer acquired one million dollars in funding toward making their film. I also helped a comedy writer whose films have grossed 100s of millions of dollars with his hard-boiled thriller.
I charge $250.00 for a script analysis. I take PayPal (pay half up front and the other half after you receive your analysis). On average it takes 1-2 full days to complete an analysis. I also write and rewrite feature-length screenplays for clients.
SAMPLES OF MY DETAILED SCRIPT COVERAGE:
https://www.box.com/s/251cee62d87f4ef81de8
https://www.box.com/s/c9ebd78e38bafxxxxfde
I work from your PDF, Word, or Final Draft files.
Contact me today. My analysis will give you the tools to effectively rewrite your screenplay.
Dan